Anon Online ; The Salvage Emerge (Show Off)

Well i was bored , And i think that i will show this screenshot too all of you…

I guess i need to improve my pixel art… But i will show more tomorrow or next saturday

Not bad, but I find the road is too light. The buildings also seem over-saturated when compared to the trees/grass. And on the taller buildings the bricks dont tile properly.

Get rid of the colored buildings, the trees are nice though.

Looks pretty good, maybe move there legs together. Look like there kneeling or something.

Is the road supposed to be almost white?

Buildings in a city don’t look like that. Colors are way too bright. Ugly shading on the trees.

I like it 😉

@lttyBitties… why are you writing on every post shading bad bla bla bla… please do it better if you can

PS. ive seen your sprites… (Too dark, too small not real looking no shading)

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The street looks a bit weird to the other colors 😉

Um…, interesting building colors, really stand out. Too much…bright, mixed colors. Agree the trees are amazing but you need to re-design buildings and road. Try a darker road, or dirt/stone road. But really nice custom pixel art, and characters do look like there kneeling.

ToDo on the Next Pixel:

  • Fixed the Building

  • Darken the Shade of every building

  • Add some Police Cars and Burning cars for real Biohazard Town

  • Add some Stoplights

  • Make only 2 Darker colors on Buildings

  • Add a Dress on Each Character :D

  • (The Tree and some Cars are already fixed/added , Check at the Soljah’s mapping contest)

  • Add some City Details…

(Appreciate your free work if you share it to me through PM (NOTE: must be your own work))

@lttyBitties… why are you writing on every post shading bad bla bla bla… please do it better if you can

PS. ive seen your sprites… (Too dark, too small not real looking no shading)

The points are valid, that’s all that matters.

That said, Fuu is one of the better pixel artists on this forum, his sprites are some of the best I’ve seen here.

@lttyBitties… why are you writing on every post shading bad bla bla bla… please do it better if you can

PS. ive seen your sprites… (Too dark, too small not real looking no shading)

Because if I said it the way I wanted to, I would get warned.

Me giving my opinion is what was asked.

Work on shading and don’t use palettes that look like MSPaint’s default.

Maybe work on the size ratios a bit more, like the tree looks minuscule to the buildings. The character is also very small, there’s just something that doesn’t look correct.

Everything is far too bright and hard on the eyes. Proportion needs a lot of work. And everything still looks very flat despite the shading.

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